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托福独立写作,开天辟地
2019-04-17

好, 同学们, 我们之前分享过很多托福写作方面的技巧, 相信很多同学也对整个考试有了一定的了解。 那么带着这些技巧如何写出一篇“像样”的文章呢? 为师知道!在这里我沿用上一次的分享中大家”惊鸿一瞥“的真题为例,给大家示范一下, 如何在独立写作中”开天辟地“。


20191-5真题


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

All university students should be required to take basic science courses even if it is not the field of their study.

 

提炼后, 题目的中心为:

 university students should take basic science courses even if   not the field of their study

根据我们分享过的破题技巧, 在这个题目里面我们要具体拓展下红色字体的部分。 Basic science = 我们学校里面的物理化学 the field of their study=主修的科目(如英语,语文等)。至于Agree / disagree 所对应的论点和理由, 我们通过一个脑图简单展示下:

 

根据以上的outline, 我们可以尝试写作这个题目, 具体如下:

 

It is disputable that every student in university ought to complete basic science courses although it is not their major. Such a view appears to be reasonable.


To begin with, subjects like this are essential to students’ academic development for that these studies lay the corner stone in student’s understanding of the world. In particular, in Physics, the learners get to discover the secrets of our universe from how electricity is produced to the generation of magnetics. It needs not to point out that Physics facilitates our life in virtually every aspect, as ordinary as mobile phones that are used on daily basis, as great as space shuttled that bring human being into deep space, are all directly or indirectly associated with the studies of Physics.  Whatever the subjects students are majoring in, the righteous understanding of the universe where each and every one of us are living in is critical.


以上是我根据之前分享过的一些写作技巧和逻辑框架完成的示范片段。包含了开头段和一个主题段的内容。 有兴趣的童鞋可以参考一下。 一般来说, 完整的独立写作文章由五个段落构成, 除去本次示范的部分, 还应该有增补的正方观点段落,让步段和结尾段。 因为时间和篇幅的关系, 余下的部分将在之后的分享中加以展示。

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